The rusty gas pump sits unused as cars go by
The historic car lies lonely...begging for gas
The bright blue sky floats slowly as the hills pass by
The abandoned house stands neglected…
Waiting to be occupied.
Monday, August 5, 2019
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I like how you used interesting language in your poem.
ReplyDeletel like how you us the rusty gas pump but as you can take the ... out
ReplyDeletebut it is very good