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Tuesday, April 9, 2019

ML:My Watermelon


My watermelon
My watermelon tastes like a sweet, scrumptious pineapple
My watermelon is delicate like a vase in a museum
it looks like  green zebra stripes
it sounds like a shirt being ripped slowly
my watermelon looks like a triangle When cut
It smells like a sweet pineapple off a tree.


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5 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 9, 2019 at 9:40 AM

    I like your adverbs and simalise but where is your fullstops

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  2. AnonymousApril 9, 2019 at 9:43 AM

    meh meh meh meh meh meh meh

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  3. AnonymousApril 9, 2019 at 9:45 AM

    😈😇😠😠😠

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  4. AnonymousApril 9, 2019 at 9:51 AM


    😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😥😥😥😥😥😥😥

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  5. AnonymousJuly 23, 2019 at 9:37 AM

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